Mercedes Feedback: The idea is very well explained, has a storyline, has what you aim to complete and well explained to an understanding on what you are going to complete, the only improvement I would recommend is adding more to your justifications such as how the idea will effect the gaming market so like your target audience.
Jack Lomas: A unique idea that you can call your own and I can see the inspirations you have taken from games such as Bloodborne and Halo. I like the idea of the alien parasite which I see can was inspired by Halo’s flood. You explained who your target audience is and how this will involve the market.
Joseph Radley – The Blog Post Structure you’ve created for your website is quite organized and pretty clean, the majority of your blog posts and where they are going to be placed are straight to the point and directly discuss what you intend to create for your final project which is a futuristic gothic town, and your process if very clear. The only area for improvement I would suggest for your blog post structure would be to organize some of your posts, from what you’ve discussed within the document, the information within each blog post is clear, but you have not specified whether they will be placed on different pages or sections, not to mention that your blog posts feel like they are all going to be on the same page altogether. Regardless, the blog post structure is great, just need a dew touches and updates.